WWW
- Good to see that you have got yourself up-to-date and completed the 3 earlier posts that were missing
- I liked your 'free choice' lip synch with Tre and Darren, and you have provided thoughtful www/ebi
- Good slection of photos from music video shoot for 'Reflection on Progress' posts
EBI
- Please label all posts correctly, with the titles we give you. Go back to the posts you have done already and make sure you follow the sheet Miss Cunliffe has emailed to you. CHECK SPELLING / CAPITAL LETTERS CAREFULLY
- Post 4 - 'Progress from Year 12 into Year 13' needs to show more thought and detail. Good use of photos, but you don't really explain much in the written part. Talk about your attitudes towards: Planning / blogs / organisation / use of camera and editing software, etc. Come back to this post and develop more
- Post 5 - 'Reflecting on Music Video Challenge' - come back to this and sort out the pics for it. They should be under the one post. At the moment you just have a WWW / EBI comment. Upload the planning documents you produced for the video shoot.
EFFORT:
IN (Improvement Needed - as posts are there, but not done completely- follow guideline on sheet)
No comments:
Post a Comment