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- Basic attampt at some posts.
- Occasionally there are some useful points being made, showing some underatanding, but these are far too few.
- Some attempt at using visual material.
EBI
- Jordan, currently all of your posts are either incomplete or not started. This is not acceptable. You are doing yourself out of a good mark. I know that you will work hard on the music video and the ancillary tasks, but unfortaunately that alone will not get you your target grade or the grade that you will deserve, because the written part of the coursework is worth 40%. If you do not work harder you will deny yourself a good grade.
- Read what I wrote on your blog last time. You have not acted on any of this. This is unacceptable.
- Post 17, you need to explain whether each record label would be suitable for your artist.
- You need to include much more visual material.
EFFORT - UN
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