WWW
- Range of videos discussed
- Some attempt to use visual material through the use of embedded video.
- Some good understanding shown regarding conventions
EBI
- Your analysis is not really analysis. Use headings- mise en scene, cinematography, sound, editing, to focus your analysis. You need to analyse in more depth and not just tell me facts about the videos.
- Use more visual material E.g. sceenshots to illustrate certain shots.
- Check spelling.
Effort - PR
Your music video is excellent by the way, really thought provoking lyrics and I hope you can create something as good as this for your coursework :)
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